Reviews for Perfection
Violet Blues chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
WOW. BRAVO! That was absolutely wonderful, I swear. Adding it to my fav's.
MovingLife chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
Ah, you know I love this poem. It is, in short, amazing. *~J~*
Dumon chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
Goodness, I LOVE THIS POEM! it shadows your other work, and your rhyming and sense of beat to the poem, and how you describe it is amazing! I LOVE THIS! This is now on my favorite list! Kudos, Dumon
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
i like it. perfection... is anyone perfect?
vturnip chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
Wow really cool. You caught all the feelings so well, the longing, indecision. Really nice!
Orlina chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
WAW! this poem is really nice and I'm happy because I'm french but I managed to understand everything!
Good Work!
Sterces chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Oh. I love the flow of this. Nice rhymes, nice rhythm. nice rhymes IN rhythm... *claps* I really enjoyed reaidng this. Thanks for your words.