|Reviews for Forever in my Heart|
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
| Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
And to counteract that humerous one that I just read, here's a very dark one... I'm impressed by your ability to write such short poems, but have so much poured into them. And this one... well, I know exactly where you're coming from on this one, and the words hit home for me... it that dark corner mentioned in this poem. It's really great, again, with some awesome imagery... you're a great writer with not only a knack for choosing the perfect words but also for pouring so much emotion into all your pieces and keeping it contained and not running wild. great.
| Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
I like the one word ending. It ends it perfectly.
| JohnnyGodfather chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Cool, I like the idea of tying this to other poems. very cool.