very sad,and sadly I can relate perfectly. Nice touch with the reference of the man on the white horse.

very sad and very deep , i like it

When I read this, I see myself, but thats ok, because isnt that how you planned it? I feel honored.. and.. I love it. Just like i Love most all of your work. Its morbid, and frightening, and makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside;) And boy oh boy, its truth!
~Blessed Be~
~Chele~

I love the morbidity of it, the sad tone is intriguing and capturing. A good read.

It's sad, always they're sad, but hey, exocism good, right? i noticed the spelling, but then, i'm a pedantic hypocrit so just let me rant! and rant i shall! I liked this one though, and if you dont appease me and write a song i'll be much apalled and continually bring it up, a bit like now...I like your use of verse, i could never pull it off and so gave up long ago, damn you for being so good! :)

good poem, lots of emotion as with all of your poems! I like this one, its eh nice:) heh ok uh talk to ya later

hey, i got this on my mirror! hehehe! hi angel! ok, i love this one, but you knew this! i really get into it and good word choice! nice!

that was a great poem. i like the beginning best, the diction or something I liked. And when someone can rhyme and make it sound good, I respect it even more. By the way, you were confused about my "sky of pearls" poem, and to clear it up, I found five sentences from different stories, and took each individual word and rearranged them into that poem. It's kinda a weird assignment, I know, but there it is! Thanks for reviewing~

Well its me of course and i really like it. So if u think it sux it doesnt lol. I think its very powerful actually and i replied yay lol byebye