|Reviews for A Precious Gem|
| Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 1/7
The shift from darkness to light is just one line but I like that.
Maybe it is just the poems I have read, but you have the narrator have wings in a lot of them. Is that some subconscious desire to be able to fly away or to problems at moment's notice?
I like how the narrator gets stronger at the end and seem to find independence in trudging on through life. Nice poem.
| Starpoet chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
Your poems have such powerful messages! Would that I was less shallow and that my poems were as meaningful as yours!
| Shinji Boi69 chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
This is beautiful. I absolutly love it. I really do. It's all in the way you look at it right. Weater or not a gem shatters or just cracks? I am making no sense but forgive me for my lack of english skills. German rocks.
your loyal reviewer,
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
ah oh thats good! oh really good!
| invalid id chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
I love the concept. The last 2 lines are perfect, It's a very good poem, very good indeed. It's wonderful in diction, and good with imagery and just got a powerful message. Even the little summary was good.
I crack, but I never shatter.
I'm strong and I will not let my emotions break me.
That can so become a song! *!