Reviews for Forgive Me
shadowedbutterfly chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
i really like this, so much emotion..the words you choose are just right, well done!
Angel Snowson chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Interesting. Promises of forever are always tricky to keep. Since everything changes, thus how can we say forever? Hope to see more works.
wierdlilazn chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
I think that your consistent use of Forgive me really placed more emphasis onto the reader and blended in very well with this written piece. I hope you this person does forgive you and forgive you for the pain you might have caused. Nicely done ]
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
How hard it is to ask for forgiveness. It can be so painful hurting others. You did a wonderful job with this piece. I really like it. The repetition of "forgive me" works very well.