|Reviews for Separate Worlds|
| The Creacher chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
This has happened to me so many times with a friendship that I thought was going great and then suddenly they stop talking to me... thank you for adding this
| The Blind Guardian chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Hello FellowCanadian! Somehow, I think I know you. Perhaps not, maybe it's the Nickname change. Anyway, all those SNES games are great, as is most of that music
On to the review
I liked this poem; it's sad, but wel-written. My only suggestion is where you divide "once all was" and "perfect" I would advise that to be in one line. That's about it. Nice poem otherwise. Your repetition of "once all was perfect..." works well.
The Blind Guardian
| EWindheim chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
I can relate to this on so many levels. Beautiful!