Reviews for You deserve it
Neon Purple Nailpolish chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Different but in a good way. I like it alot.
DraconigenaArma chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
I liked it. It slowly made it to the point, give you the feeling you get when you slowly understand a riddle. Good job.
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Interesting piece. I enjoyed how your poem winds around the idea slowly coiling up and the strikes at the end. Neat, and nicely done. Feel free to stop by my site and let me know what you think of my work. Take care now.