| Reviews for Still |
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   GalaxyLei chapter 1 . 7/21/2004 Oh hey, you know what this reminds me of? . It's a song from RENT. |
| Jennacharm chapter 1 . 5/2/2004 One of you better works. But maybe I like it better than others because I like refrains. And I like repetition. So I like the repetition of 'Still' Maybe if you tied the idea of elements instead of the fish in the third stanza it would improve this poem. - Jennacharm |
| Photophobic13 chapter 1 . 4/23/2004 I love it! I think that we all know the feeling, one time or another. I'm glad that you put this into perspective and did such a great job with it. ~Ph.13 |
| buryxmexstanding chapter 1 . 4/21/2004 Very good! I like it alot... so true! Good job! ~Jo **Ps. Thanks ever so much for your review... it was a great uplift!** |
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/20/2004 nice poem! |
| Stephen Fierce Publications chapter 1 . 4/20/2004 Cool poem. It's really good. P.S Can you review my haiku on "Foxes"? |
| Ethne Lovegood chapter 1 . 4/20/2004 It sorta gave me the impression that everything though gleaming, gleamed coldy...Nice Poem. Lovely Job! : ) |