Reviews for Still
GalaxyLei chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
Oh hey, you know what this reminds me of? .
It's a song from RENT.
Jennacharm chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
One of you better works.
But maybe I like it better than others because I like refrains.
And I like repetition.
So I like the repetition of 'Still'
Maybe if you tied the idea of elements instead of the fish in the third stanza it would improve this poem.
- Jennacharm
Photophobic13 chapter 1 . 4/23/2004
I love it! I think that we all know the feeling, one time or another. I'm glad that you put this into perspective and did such a great job with it.
buryxmexstanding chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
Very good! I like it alot... so true! Good job!
**Ps. Thanks ever so much for your review... it was a great uplift!**
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
nice poem!
Stephen Fierce Publications chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Cool poem. It's really good.
P.S Can you review my haiku on "Foxes"?
Ethne Lovegood chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
It sorta gave me the impression that everything though gleaming, gleamed coldy...Nice Poem. Lovely Job! : )