Reviews for Thoughts of Fear
Kriss-C chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
Thats so beautifully written!
Matt Alan chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
I know the fear sorry dude...But this is good
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Aw really this is so sweet. Sometimes all you can be is patient, especially when your feelings are involved. If your patient enough then maybe the girl, or in my case guy will come around. They will come to realize that they let a good thing go, and then hopefully they'll come back. OK...I'm through trying to sound like Dr. Phil or Oprah. I'll leave ya alone now, but first I wanted to say this was a wonderful poem, and it really made me re-evaluate some things that I'm going through. Great Job. TTFN.
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
another good one. short, but it gets the feeling across. great job!
Glennesque chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
heartfelt, I know how yo feel on that front. I like the rhyming in the last stanzer, though i don't think it works as well in the middle, maybe a few too many syllable(only my opinion though). Keep it up
Arreis Kurai chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
except in your first stanza, your rhymes are consistent and well thought out... perhaps try to rhyme the first stanza better 'cause it seems a bit out of place...other that that, i love the poem, and the idea behind it
*Arreis Kuari*