Reviews for Beauty
Kriss-C chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
That is the sweetest thing i've ever read!
Matt Alan chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
Beauty so rare...Great job Leo
Mistress Mira chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
Aw...so sweet...Very good, and I don't care much about the rhyme scheme either, I mean a poem doesn't have to rhyme all the way through or even at all. That's one of the beauties of poetry. Don't worry what others might say, this is your poem and your feelings...Keep it up!
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
And so was this poem. Beautiful I mean. This truely is a beautifully written poem. Ya know you REALLY are a good writer, and you should be proud of your work. Anybody can see that you have tons of talents, as a writer of non- fiction, as wall as poetry. I'm just glad that you decided to share your unique gift with the world. Great job.
TatteredDreams chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Eh_; When i read the second like I started thinkin of that old song... "Hey Mikey you're so fine! You're so fine you blow my mind! Hey mikey!" XXD
Beautiful/beauty is used to much in my opinion. I'd replace some of them with another word. Otherwise, very well done_