|Reviews for Promises Broken|
| AngelaiR chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
Omg! This poem is brilliant! Funny thing is that I can relate to it almost perfectly, down to the very last word besides the whole brown eyes part, but my friend who this describes has brown eyes! Omg.. wow! Well done! the best! you rock! awesome!
plz r/r toodles trippy
| Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
But your words are nothing
Just hot air moving
Warming the hair on the back of my neck
When it gets to the point that people's words no longer mean anything simply, because of their incinserity...It feels exactly like that. You captured it perfectly.