hey jery, this is tristyn, this ine is pretty good. very sad story, but things will get better. this poem gave me goosebumps. i like it and its in my fave's. I love ya!

hola! oh *drains happiness* that sad... erg... *builds up loads of emotion* I shall make my poem... nm... can't rank up to this one: this one my fav! heehe... sad! but it good... why do all my friends make me feel like I cannot write worth crap? LOL! wohoo for me *grumbles* :P toodles~Angel