|Reviews for Reflection|
| do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
i loved the language you used in this piece. it was short, but got the point across. great job, i loved it.
| The holy One chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
i like this very much but not everything in the mirror is meaningless
look for the person on the inside and not onthe out
| wammes chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
Good work...hopefully not too many people can relate to this...you know what they say...love thyself.
| Amara Ryden chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
nice job. i like how there is truth in it, and some people i know can relate.
not to be mean or anything, but i think that the last line, or just the word 'creature' has a blunt ending. all the other words sound great like 'partake, and avert'. perhaps another word might sound better... )