Reviews for The Hidden World
PaganScribe chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
Touching, creative.
Ancoelle chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
I really like how you composed this poem. It really makes me picture a tropical paradise somewhere far away.
Gothic Renegade chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
I love how you wrote this. It's almost like you were discribeing paradise. I'm putting this one in the favorite.
-Shastel
PS. Thanks for putting me in your favorite authors box, much apriciated. : )
butterflydreaming chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
Absolutely.
I like how the rhyme scheme in the last stanza calls attention to the advice.
AmethystPisces chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
Lovely piece. It's very descrpitive. I love the picture that springs to mind reading this. Excellent.