Reviews for The Hidden World
PaganScribe chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
Touching, creative.
Ancoelle chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
I really like how you composed this poem. It really makes me picture a tropical paradise somewhere far away.
Gothic Renegade chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
I love how you wrote this. It's almost like you were discribeing paradise. I'm putting this one in the favorite.
PS. Thanks for putting me in your favorite authors box, much apriciated. : )
butterflydreaming chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
I like how the rhyme scheme in the last stanza calls attention to the advice.
AmethystPisces chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
Lovely piece. It's very descrpitive. I love the picture that springs to mind reading this. Excellent.