Reviews for Kiss
TaschaBear chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
Very touching. I love the fact that this poem seems to be a landmark of what you dreamed of and how you dreamed of it and how is actually was the opposite of what you thought it would be like. Keep up the good work.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
ah kisses... :) nice poem mind you.
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
Beautifully written. This was so sad. I really can relate to this particular poem, and I just wanted to say that you've done a great job. TTFN
MistrissD chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
oohh . love the rhyming and mix of Fate within this, nicely done
AmethystPisces chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
This is excellent. You speak the truth, lust will leave you alone.
illuzionist69 chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
omfg... totally cool!
Angry Fairy chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
i realy like it! i love how you used a simple kiss seem so...passionate