Reviews for The Invader
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
well, wat did he diss in the first place?
ha...
u do need to improve on some parts..
but it ain't bad...
work on it eh buddy?
don't let it get u down
Perfectly-Insane33 chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
WOAH, someone DISSED your POEM? Retards. Your poems are NOT bad! Poets are...*cough* special...cause at least we don't yell at people or start fights as much...that's special. Haha, I'm hyper today.
MistrissD chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
hehe love the last two lines. No one has any right to bash anyone else's work, unless it seriously discriminates beliefs, even than it should be critisim, not bashing. Dont listen to anyone but your heart, and keep writting, this was very well done