|Reviews for Shimmer|
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
wow, nice poem! i like it
| FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
Hey this is really good. I liked that you repeated some lines in the poem. It made the poem's meaning stand out even more. You've done a great job here. Keep up the good work. TTFN
| Perfectly-Insane33 chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
Kinda odd rhyming scheme, but I can't complain, mine don't rhyme at all. Great job!