Reviews for Beyond the feelings within my question
Rochester chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
Dadaoism. Random words and phrases strung together to form something from chaos. Very hard to understand, very easy to write, very hard to do well. This one does it well. It seems like it was theraputic for you. On the other hand, this poem has some grammatical errors in it. Proofread and find a good beta reader with a red pen to make it bleed.
jus-me chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
sounds honest. the slightest bit of editing and a lil bit of structure would polish it up and make it more fluent the first read beautiful and very honest. I like it alot. easy to relate to.
Kris 56 chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
Yeah, I can relate. It's a neat poem and I enjoyed reading it. It was a very good read. (Could you possible read mine?) I enjoyed this piece of poetry, it's really good.