|Reviews for The Lamentations of a Corpse|
| JD Kennedy chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
Wow! You know what? This really made me feel claustrophobic, an amazing efect, the reader actually feel's as if s/he is the corpse. I love the final two lines, it actually creates a fear of death in me, well done!
It would be great if you could read some of my stuff if you can, I would really appreciate it.