Reviews for Shards of Truth
arcane devices chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
great use of metaphors, i don't know what to say, i'm left speechless. (great job)-ADD
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
It's so long, yet it never loses its purpose or beauty. That takes talent which you have no lack of.
Hawke
Elizabeth Clary chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
It's a good poem. It has good meaning. It's true, you do have to wait and see. I understand what your saying, this pome really explained it well.
*Liz*
Karasu no sei chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
As usual, amazing imagery and description.
Commas?
Where?
It's a beautiful piece, especially the last stanza. I like the way you've repeated the word Whole, it really imprints its meaning into you.
Karasu
Mr. Moonsong chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
I like this, it's beautiful. But I do agree with 'girl in denial', there's too much commas. It somehow disrupts the flow and rhythm, making it slightly hard to read. Overall, a neat one.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
i love the last stanze the most! just beautiful!
A Girl in Denial chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
This is nice. I liked it a lot. The only thing I can say is once again you have fallen into that habit of adding commas after every single line. You really don't need them every time. I find it blocks the thought process, and doesn't flow as well. But it's your poem, not mine.
agid
Chen chapter 1 . 4/23/2004
Nice poem, the feelings are well expressed through the words. Well done!
Continue writing! Great Job
-Chen