|Reviews for First Snow|
| Pixie-Twix chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
*jaw drops* you write this and you like my stuff? i look like a kindergarten story next to this! i love it! brings back memeories of a girl who used to be my friend, we would wake up super early when it had snowed and walk to the store, just to see the foot prints in the snow, knowing we were the first to feel it.
Gah...sorry...sickinging moment there. Thank you so much for your review! I really do appriciate it. As for when they meet, well i have to take some of the humor and happiness out fo the story...meaning DJ goes through some changes as well as gabe and angel. by the time they meet angel is so desperate for love shell seek it anywhere she thinks it dwells. thanks again and keep writting! your rock!
| katherine chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
ohh...really great discriptions...next jk rowling..haha...
| ghetto chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
although this essay was a little short, it's contents were very rich. i especially enjoyed the part where you compared snow flakes on roses to diamonds on a red velvet case. nice!
| dude chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
cool compo, man. i'm so into it. i mean, the analogy is like wicked, dude. man, u need to write more.
| shyXshortieXbabe chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
uhh...maybe I just don't get this kind of abstract writing or something...but it was uhh...interesting?