Reviews for The Warning Of Dawn
Unknown Survivor chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Interesting topic. Well done. (:
Pointy Objects chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
That was seriously great. I'm not even joking; it was. I love personification, and this was a perfect example of not taking it too far. Dawn was Dawn and Evening was Evening, nand you could see their "personalities" without thinking they were animated Disney characters or something. Bravo, buddy. Bravo.
Willy D chapter 1 . 4/23/2004
This poem reminds me a lot of Emily Dickenson's "Because I Could Not Stop for Death," except it's more enjoyable to read (no confusing hyphens). Yeah, this is definitely good stuff, let's have some more!
Rabe Carithlee chapter 1 . 4/23/2004
Wow. I love the powerful personification of the Dawn and Evening. I can't help but feel that this sprang from the heart as well. Great job! I can easily see why this is one of your favorites to this day. I was quite proud of my recent poem I constructed, so I decided to put it out there as well. If you can, I'd be pleased to see more of your poetry up here sometime.