Reviews for diamond days
linaeve chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
wonderful images, especially the recurring jewels and shine.
"so you can say that you tamed me
with white light and platinum.." beautiful phrase.
Kelpylion chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
Wonderfully sorrowfull and bitter. You managed to give this an entrancingly beautiful, calm 'voice,' while still expressing a subtle sort of -anger? I'm not sure that's the right word-maybe fear?-about this particular sort of relationship. Made me sick and dazzled at the same time. Excellent.
pennydeath chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
I love the tone of this...biting and sarcastic and quite unwilling to be a trophy anything. The wordplay in the first stanza ("your progressing domination,/or as I like to call it,/your imminent damnation.") made me smile. And I'm reminded of Satine (Moulin Rouge)...
Prophecy Puppet chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
Wow...such amazing imagery (which I'm still a sucker for)! _ I love's deffinately going in my faves.
Never stop writing :o)
mapofyourhead chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
Love this...very nice and anti-materialism. I like the last three lines of the first stanza; they rock my socks. *nods* very nicely done.
EveryNowAndThen chapter 1 . 4/23/2004
I love the idea behind this piece, and the repitition makes it flow so beautifully. Good work.