Reviews for breathe
addie pray chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
Great poem, gorgeous format. I disliked the repetition, I would suggest saying it once in the beginning, and once at the end, which was very strong. Well done.
Prophecy Puppet chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
This is very interesting...I can just the sense of dread and almost foreboding...I especially like the imagery with the blue smoke. However, I think there is a hidden meaning that Im not getting. I'm sure the person you wrote this for would _
This is great work. Keep it up! :)
Belphegor 665 chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
Awesome. Absolutely awesome. I don't know why people even try when there's work like this just floating about.
jewel of the nile7 chapter 1 . 4/23/2004
it's beautyful.. very deep
in ways it's a bit difficult to understand but i guess i'm not as expert as you are