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![]() ![]() ![]() "Fade out" and "explosion of Mental Anguish" are my fav poems! They're incredibly awesome. I like the structure of "fade out". And "esplosion of mental words" are exactly how I feel at times. I couldn't say it better myself! |
![]() ![]() ![]() These were pretty good, i especially liked fade out. That one was very good, along with next day. If i could give any correction, it would be not to try so hard on the rhyming. if it feels forced, it usually sounds forced, and sounded forced in my head. Very good though. Keep writing. |