Someone should slap her and tell her what an idiotic thing to do, killing yourself. I hope Purgatory is treating her jusst fine... e_e

M you have to love writers who have a distinct voice. *you do* First person stories are nice. I may be bias, but they just feel more emotional to me. You really get in depth with the character more and REALLY get in their head. 8D

"Life is simply a chain of events, a long tangled string of moments and emotions, thrown at you all at once. I prefer to think that it is the events themselves, and how they ensue, that is unfair."

O.o I like that. Sounds so much better than that oh so cliche "Life is unfair! WA~!" I'm always tempted to go "Say that to the people in Israel or North Korea...;;" Some people just seriously don't know how blessed they truly are. Pu. u.u;;

I like how you describe life (ha ha, wrote wind there and realized...what wait? wind? oh life! yeah...)

For some reason the song The World by Yuki Kajiura comes to mind. You should look it up. It's a beautiful song that I love on frequently. That and the song To Nowhere by Yuki Kajiura. Man I love how that woman writes her lyrics. M, so good. I feel her songs could fit this story. _ Aura and Stray Child from her would fit too...seriously. Look her songs up on youtube, especially those ones. They're beautiful. Her song Vanity is good too. 8D

This was a GOOD and Catchy introduction. XD No wonder Bunni rec-ed it. I'll get to reading more later - step dad wants back on now.

SMOOCHES

MUCH LOVE

You are a very gifted writer and really enjoyed the story. Wonderful job.

lies. Lies and deceit.

I just finished reading this, and I must say...I'm absolutely astounded. The emotions within this is just so deep and raw and it just really reached into me. I loved this story so much! Keep up your amazing writing.

I love it so far! I think her character is really interesting. I like Felix too.

are u kiddin me! did she really have to die? oh man im gonna cry now...great story but i really thought he was going to be able to save her...now im all teary

This story is so magnificent I cannot help but hold my breath.

xx

Ali

dun dun dun!

oh no...

FENIX! SAVE STORM FROM THE FIRE! ))

woopie can't wait to read. :)

:(

that was so sad.

oh god. YEY ANGST! ))

this is so awesumely awesum!

eh...i don't like Jenny too. I hate annoying little bratty children. AHAHA NO OFFENSE. God made me like this. :S

anyway, can't wait to read what's gonna happen next.

YEY! FINALLY I CAN COMMENT! Awile fictionpress wouldn't let me log in for some stupid error thing. _

YEY! I WANNA SEE HOW SHE CAN EVEN TRY TO KILL FENIX. :D 'cuz she loves him! AHAHAHAHA. i hope she does.

Your writing is beautiful its hard to catch my breath. Amazing job, though im a huge "give me happily ever after" person, I must admit its inevitable not to fall in love with this story.

:)

-PromiseNotToPromise~

Too good for words.

Hey, I used to read some of your other works and I just recently starting reading on fictionpress again so I thought I'd look you up. Just wanted you to know that this is an AMAZINGLY written and original story. Of course I would have loved to see a picture perfect happy ending but this ending suited the story better. I really, really, love your writing style even though I could never write that way. Your characters have incredible depth to them and that is something that I strive for also. I know you finished this story awhile ago but I thought I'd let you know how much I like it!