Wow, that's really poetic and dark... I LOVE IT! I see you've written a lot of poetry *eyes list* It's incredible, how you manage to make this poem rhyme, yet make it non-cheesey, and still incredible. It's so dark and morbid... Mind if i print this out and stick it on the wall?

If I'm not to horridly mistaken, I thought this was written by another author? I know I read almost, if not, exactly like this in my english class.