Reviews for Hear me
oohaysemag2001 chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
I care for the lost little girl, I'll help her find her way home, and I'll help her find the will to live again.
Amazing poem
Keep up the good work
ttfn
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
This speaks volumes...so many wander lost...
Leo chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
Awesome you have done really well on appealing to the readers sinces you can almost visualize the child and you can also see it as a medaphorical fashion!
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
this poem reminds me of one of my close friends.. she lives with her (step)mom and dad, but they both treat her mean - mainly because of their naivete...thanks for sharing and keep on writing!
Kanojo wa ore no Hikari chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
O, this is a very nice poem. Thanks for the reveiw on mine. _ I will have more on, thanks I'm going to go read more of yours now...
Mistress Mira chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
This reminds me of a character in a story my friend and I are writing...very good.