|Reviews for Hear me|
| oohaysemag2001 chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
I care for the lost little girl, I'll help her find her way home, and I'll help her find the will to live again.
Keep up the good work
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
This speaks volumes...so many wander lost...
| Leo chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
Awesome you have done really well on appealing to the readers sinces you can almost visualize the child and you can also see it as a medaphorical fashion!
| marshbar960 chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
this poem reminds me of one of my close friends.. she lives with her (step)mom and dad, but they both treat her mean - mainly because of their naivete...thanks for sharing and keep on writing!
| Kanojo wa ore no Hikari chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
O, this is a very nice poem. Thanks for the reveiw on mine. _ I will have more on, thanks I'm going to go read more of yours now...
| Mistress Mira chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
This reminds me of a character in a story my friend and I are writing...very good.