Reviews for Painting a Sunset
mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
short and beautiful. Well done.
Nat
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
ah thats a nice image to use, it flows well ;) and thx for all those reviews, much appriciate
invalid id chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
Oh, short (which I hate) but good! I love the comparisons and images this gives!
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
It has a nice little rhyming pattern if you don't listen to the words at all because once you delve deeper, it's sad and beautiful! I love the idea of having everything symbolize a different part of the sunset! Beautiful _
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
Vivid imagery. I especially like the ending...it kind brings this slightly morbid feeling to the overall happy poem, which is hard to pull off. Awesome work!
WakeRobin chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
I get amazing images from this poem. I like it.