Reviews for The Path
mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
though alot of my poems deal with pathways and other refrences to the cycle of life and death i have never written anything as morbid and hopeless as this and i must say i truely like people including myself focus on some joyful ending to this path while you blatantly state the reality of the journey. very well written.
Nat
Aishestel chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
It's sad.. Well written as usual ;-)
One does feel like this when there is no hope...
Keep it up!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
thats sad! *sniff* wow tho, wow!
invalid id chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
Love the repetition here, it further gets the point across. I've said this a lot but you have a unique style and it's different than anything on this site.
Faithrss chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
I love your use of harsh alliteration in this poem. It emphasises the monotonus despair of life, good work.
WakeRobin chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
This flows amazingly. I really love this. Thanks for putting me on your fav list. :) Keep writing!
UnwantedMisery chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
Great poem, very mysterious, but great nonetheless.
Keep it up!
Horseridergrl chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
Oh, this is a cool poem! One of the most...mysterious poems I have ever read! Well-written.