Reviews for Unfinished Patchwork
forgottenmoon831 chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
I like the theme of this one, nice symbolism with the patchwork. Keep on!
Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
that was really beautiful. I loved the concept of the patchwork, all the different little squares joining to make one. i especially enjoyed, "The squares tell their own stories..."
it was really great.
thanks for reviewing my work :)
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
sad, but well said. true and good.
invalid id chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
I'm running out of things to say! Very good job here! * * * * *!
Watershoot chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
...Love the patchwork idea, very well written.
nine iron chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
Great title, love the concept. I think though this is an unfinished poem. It needs a good solid layout to increase its readability. The catchy title and idea is very good, I actually like the poem and did enjoy it. I just think that little improvements to increase its readability will improve it drastically, I could be a fantastic poem instead of a good one.
Good luck if you choose to improve it.
Nine Iron