Reviews for A Complicated Friendship
MusicGurl8129 chapter 14 . 2/27
I loved this Chapter! It was so sweet. Holly needs to realize that Will isn't happy with Vic, if he's happier with someone else (her) then that means he's unhappy with Victoria and that Victoria will also be unhappy. Will also needs to let Vic go, even if he and Holly don't end up together. I think he should say he doesn't feel more for her. He should do it for himself and her.
MusicGurl8129 chapter 6 . 2/27
I'm loving this Story! The Characters are interesting, and the Story Plot is also amazing! :)
MusicGurl8129 chapter 1 . 2/27
AW. Cute! This Story seems like it could be good :)
Sapphire Faith chapter 20 . 10/28/2013
I really liked your characters. They may have been slightly unreasonable at times, but they were all good at heart. This ending was pretty good. Overall, I think you did a really good job with this.
Sapphire Faith chapter 19 . 10/28/2013
Riley's actually a pretty cool character. I can't believe she'd just let go of Will like that. This chapter was all right.
Sapphire Faith chapter 18 . 10/28/2013
That was unexpected, but I'm glad Vic finally stopped ignoring Holly. There was a verb tense error, but I don't think it's that big of a deal. Like you said, this is basically a rough draft. It's still pretty good, though.
Sapphire Faith chapter 17 . 10/28/2013
Personally, I can understand Holly, but I think she still should have told Vic before she got too invested in her relationship with Will. I don't think this chapter had very many mistakes.
Sapphire Faith chapter 16 . 10/28/2013
Was Will drunk during his phone call with Holly? So, like I mentioned before, it's probably best to keep the flashbacks out of bolded letters, but this chapter was really good otherwise.
Sapphire Faith chapter 15 . 10/28/2013
I think this chapter was heavy with drama, but at least you were broadening your horizons and trying something new. I noticed you misspelled "angel" as "angle."
Sapphire Faith chapter 14 . 10/28/2013
I'm not entirely sure how to write a kiss, either. I really liked this chapter. Of course, there was a lot of drama, but I don't think you overdid it with a bunch of screaming or anything like that.
Sapphire Faith chapter 13 . 10/28/2013
That escalated quickly. This chapter was written very well. Good job.
Sapphire Faith chapter 12 . 10/28/2013
You sure know how to end a chapter. I'm guessing "Wollie" is a combination of Willie and Holly. I didn't see very many mistakes in this chapter. This chapter was really good.
Sapphire Faith chapter 11 . 10/28/2013
I hope Will gets his act together soon. I didn't notice very mistakes in this chapter. You did a good job! I wonder what's going on between James and Holly...
Sapphire Faith chapter 10 . 10/28/2013
I think it's better not to make the thoughts and flashbacks bolded. It's just easier on the eyes. I feel so bad for Holly. I really liked this chapter.
Sapphire Faith chapter 9 . 10/27/2013
I hope Will realizes who Holly is soon. It's going to hurt a lot of people if he gets too far in his relationship with Vic. I noticed few mistakes, the biggest one being the fact that James called Will "Willie." Other than that, this was a really great chapter.
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