|Reviews for Fire Beauty|
| nine iron chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
Oh fantastic, beautiful. I love the words, it all flows so well. The formatting is a little not to my taste, I prefere a little more maturity and time in the layout but I still am overwhelmed by the pictures and beuatiful images that are created,the warmth givin off by a fire almost warms you cheek as you read, Ok it does feel like it. Some fantastic lines towards the end, it is more to my taste there. I love it really, got to be one of my favourites I have read.
| confused being99 chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
wow, great poem, i really enjoyed it, gave me a whole new look at fire... Usually people say it just destroys, but its not all bad i guess... Keep writing