Reviews for Princess of her own World
Rachel M. T chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
Sorry it took me awhile to get to this, but its great so far! I would possibly combine some sentences to make them less awkward, but otherwise its flawless! I can't wait for the next chapter or part or whatever it is! Wonderful job!~Rachel
Gavin Kingsley chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
Wow. Wow, wow,wow,wow,wow wowwy, wow.
How utterly heart wrenching. You have a mastery of words that would give even the the greatest poets and storytellers pause.
I don't wich story came first, but it makes for an interesting backstory to Vampiress that should be fleshed out and explored.
With every story I read you make me hungry, drooling for more.
I hearby procalaim to not anymore because I can't stand the wait for the next parts...
Ok I lied. Anything you write I read, again and again. You're an inspirtation even to me.
Don't stop.
Gavin Kingsley
Lady Draculea chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
Oh wow, beautifully discriptive. I don't really have much to say other then praise, and you don't *just* want praise...right? :D I'll give you praise anyways, whether you like it or not.
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The discriptions in the first paragraphes was great. I could feel like I was actaully there watching the scene play out infront of me.
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Maybe we could of done more if we had a bit more of a disciption of Jareth? I keep seeing him as a shadow in my mind. A shadow with blue eyes.
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It's sad that Joslyn couldn't be with Jareth. Vampire royalty, hmm...being royalty, mortal or not, must be tough. Especially in your story here.
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Now this...thing, where Jareth breaks it off with Joslyn. I think there's more happening then what meets the eye, don't you think? Of course you think , *you're* the authoress after all:P
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Anyways, great story, I would like to see you finish it, no pressure though, writing under pressure isn't fun.
Again, great job on the detail and slight mysterious edge.
MorganRay chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
Your story is very lovely, and yes, i think you should continue this.
Luv and Peace chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
2 lazy to log in. Anyway, i think u should update it! Totally!
entanglednthorns chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
Well, isnt this a sad story! *sniffles and wipes tears away* Speak of the devil! You aren't going to leave the story here are you! You evil authoress you! It should continue! NOW!
Sworn Destiny chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
O_O This is..beautiful.
You'll be continuing this...soon...RIGHT? Please!
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
well... the description seems good, i guess it's sorta romance huh? good anyway, continue?