Reviews for Yume
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Excellent piece of descriptive poetry here, vivid scenes that portray the sense of peace and redemption that many can only dream of. Excellent-Keith Andrew
izzy chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
its good!_ im speechless too...but again...its th human's fault...
Megumi87 chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
Your poem was very good. The fact that you stated how soceity is now made it more catchy. And people can also relate to it very well. But, in a way, be a little more desciptive towards society itself, along with the dream. Overall, I really loved the poem. And giving a little footnote for people who don't understand Japanese is very helpful too. _
Red Vision chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
that was very beautiful, i liked it very much, peace