Reviews for Yume |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent piece of descriptive poetry here, vivid scenes that portray the sense of peace and redemption that many can only dream of. Excellent-Keith Andrew |
![]() ![]() its good!_ im speechless too...but again...its th human's fault... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your poem was very good. The fact that you stated how soceity is now made it more catchy. And people can also relate to it very well. But, in a way, be a little more desciptive towards society itself, along with the dream. Overall, I really loved the poem. And giving a little footnote for people who don't understand Japanese is very helpful too. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was very beautiful, i liked it very much, peace |