Reviews for Jelousy Haiku
asherlev chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
i'm not quite sure whether your review was kind or not, but thank you for it anyway. while i wrote the poem, i was reading a lot of mythology for english, so there are a few narcissus references in it (although i am not narcissic and that wasn't the point of the poem) it's more about. . . well, what it said. there is meaning in the last lines. why they're meaningful depends more on the reader's point of view.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 4 . 5/18/2004
hehehehe *looks around aimlessly...* err last time i comment on sm1s review to me. i think i misinterpreted urs :P :(... *looks around again* ladeede! anyways, nice set of jealousy haikus. i hate that envious jealousy feeling. kinda like that feeling i have right now that u can write a haiku and i cant :P ;)
apen-hjerte chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
I thought it was a good idea to look at one of your Haikus, because of your comments about mine. I am glad I have - I will lay mine out differently next time.
flyinfrogg chapter 4 . 5/12/2004
this ones nice.
flyinfrogg chapter 3 . 5/12/2004
i like your word choice
flyinfrogg chapter 2 . 5/12/2004
very good.
flyinfrogg chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
you got the whole meaning of jealousy in this haiku.
twilightwriter07 chapter 4 . 5/11/2004
Nice haiku here...I liked creative touch to this one. Keep up the good work. _~
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
Don't be jealous... I'm quite jealous of you too... keep up the great works...
lisaslife chapter 3 . 5/5/2004
This one seems a little different than the others, but still good.
lisaslife chapter 2 . 5/5/2004
lisaslife chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
Well, don't be jealous, youre one of MY favorite writers.
Magpie Poet chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
yes yes yes yes!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
I really like this one...I can feel it.
JlyfishLuver chapter 3 . 5/1/2004
oh Envy! I like... keep it up!
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