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xXanyothergirlXx chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Amazing :'( chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Everything I've said about the heartfelt speech to a husband, I believe I think about this too.

Even when i knew what I was going into even from the first sentences, yet the ending was more effective than I had anticipated. It's infectious, cruelly sad, emotional, and above all else, it was beautiful.
thisaccountisdeadNOW chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Beautiful. Heart rending. Tragic.
coolies chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
amazingly poignant
Gilee7 chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
Wow. Very good. I was kinda wondering if it would tell how he died. I like the way you did it. Also I liked the way there was a person from different parts in his life, going back to first grade all the way to in the military. It read awkwardly at times, but it was still very good, very emotional. Good job! You're a good writer!