Reviews for The Unknown
SilverMoonlitPath chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
Humm... this is a tricky one. first i was thinking a vamp, could be but the whole not taking form thing would count that out. i think ill go with an old haunting memorie, though im most likly was off. ~kyoky
peachy-666 chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
Wow...kinda freaky...scary..and yet still good. Things that mess with your mind...they're just great. Anyways, loved it.
Tindie chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Damn that was long but fantastic. I envy you, you're so good at poetry. Haven't a clue as to what it could be but it's powerfully worded all the same. - Tindie
Miss W D Halliwell chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
You really are rather a morbid sod ain't u babe! I couldn't make any sense of it what-so-ever. You'll have to tell me what its about... but i'm guessing maybe an unwanted memory? luv Will-Will xx
Purplebunny chapter 1 . 4/29/2004
Ok lets have a go at this.. is it all the failures and insecurities in life, all the mistakes, all the pressure of life that causes depression and ultimatly death? Sounds eerily similar to something I recently wrote, but yours is better. Tell me if im right!
Farewell-Twilight chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
almost scary ending but wery well written. I can't think of what it could be but you get the feelings across well whatever it may be.
Stringergirl chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
well, i'm one that can't win that secret prize...all i know that it's for someone u probably hate like hell!...and one more thing i know...that i love this peice...i don't know... i just love sadistic stuff...but i wish i had more time 2 read more of ur stuff.
Asta lavista!
Luv,
Aamna