Reviews for Spring Cleaning Time
simpleplan13 chapter 3 . 2/6/2007
lol... that was cute.. i liked it
monkey chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
wow... i could actually tell who most of these are... amazing. who's the fuchsia one & the young-looking one & the one that's not yours? (u can e-mail me if u want instead of posting it)
simpleplan13 chapter 2 . 4/29/2005
i lvoe this collection... how you describe yourself through the clothing,... keep them coming
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
nice descriptions... i love the last stanza... its awesome
Blondeggman chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
whoa surprised how ppl can make a poem out of n e thing. are u sure this doesnt have n e hidden meanings? lol. eventho i just asked u cause u r sitting right next to me as of now lol. bye!
tari-morielen chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
This is great, it really made me smile. It is light hearted and a pleasure to read. one thing though - you repeat the phrase 'draws attention to itself' which weakens the poem as it makes it seem more amateurish (because it makes it seem like you couldnt find something else to say)
Otherwise, i thought it was fantastic. I will be looking for some more of your writing !
Corky Riviera chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
Yoko shares your pain, but she isn't strong enough to throw out those old coats in her closet. Hahaha, very cute!