Reviews for Abusing Authority |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. Liked the ending, although it would have been nicer if Jer had killed him and not gone to jail on self-defence plea, but whatever. all's well that ends as well as it can given the circumstances, eh? Didnt hate it in the least bit. keep writing(...whatever else you're working on)! Cheers, Alexx |
![]() ![]() ![]() sweet! nice job1 :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the her answer to the fave word question. so hot |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was good. i am so happy that the story was a shorter then what I expected it to be becuz if u ask the reviewers who read my stories i seriously bullshit about updating and they probably hate the hell out of me. that was really good and i enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness im about to cry. i luv Jer so much oh my goodness! that chappy was so amazing i swear it was. i enjoy reading mr. alkio's POV |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so good and the last chappy was too. It was so weird and scary. I mean it seemed like she would've been imagining Mr. Aliko when she was in the shower and then when she got out he was standing in the doorway or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really good and Mr. Aliko is a sick man. I mean I'm not saying anything is Chandra's fault or that she deserved it because I like her, but in a way it's like she made him think she liked him becuz she flirted w/ him a lot and it's only incouraging his sick mind. |
![]() ![]() ![]() my mouth is like wide open and i thought sum1 was gonna run into the room and catch me reading that. like OMG that was so unexpected. i cant believe that SOAB did that like that and that poor girl. great writing skills. BTW, how old were you when u wrote this, cuz its really good? another thing, how long have u been writing? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was great i am so reading the next xhapter, you are so rad, you really make your stories woth reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay ! Happy ending ! That was really good ! You must continue writing ! ~ Noelle ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() That review button joke was oh so funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was F*CKING kool i loved it me and my sick mind well thanks for the story and as you can tell i not vere good at this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Cute! . Cuteness...bad bad evil teacher...he was insane...insane people are cool! The dude that stabbed him was cool...VIOLENCE! Yay for the violence! . I think it was realy cool...only the typing needed some work. . But the story was yayful . Yayful? Yeah..well..farewell and keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was awesome. i like the ending. it sucks that the bastard lived, but i guess we can't have everything we want. |