Reviews for Abusing Authority |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That made me feel so sad. What a horrible person to rape his own student. I don't know how someone could do something so horrible. I really liked this story. Please write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I read the whole thing, so I think it'd be just evil of me not to review. Especially since you reviewed my sotry o0o;. Hee. I don't have much time, but I decided to post this review in case I forgot. I have a terrible memory ._.; Anyways, this story was definitely interesting. It kept my attention. I read it all in an hour XD Maybe I read fast... I don't know. I really liked Jer. Such a sweetie. Little saviour, lol. He sounded cute, too. Alkio just sounded demented. I actually liked the ending. Happy endings make me happy. I mean, the whole story was depressing, and the ending was a relief. No angst. Yay. XDD Crap, well. I'm out of time. I have more to say, but meh. Lovely story! I'm so glad I took the time to read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() P lol. what a great ending! you could have made it longer by adding more details, but i like it! -your pecado- |
![]() ![]() text text text text you want in italics text text text text you want in bold text text text text you want underlined text text the end. type it up in notepad, use the tags above, and remove the asterisks. Oh and put wherever you want a line break. Or, if you're using ms word, just put in the italics using the italics button and when you save, save as type .html or web page (it should be an option in the drop down menu when you save). Hope that helped. |
![]() ![]() ![]() can you ask for a happier ending? they get married, elope, and have a kid whose name shall forever be named loki... ~yams |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. intense. ~yams |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gawd, you just HAD to end it there... Amazing story though. |
![]() ![]() two words: loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay, I think I can live with that ending... sure I'm a little sad you didn't write more... but I can live with it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() BRAVO! I'm glad you finished it this way. I would have had some difficulty, but you seemed to hit it right on the nose lol. Very nicely done. *Applauds* Bravo. Cinnamon |
![]() ![]() ![]() what the hell? not to flame you or whatever, but the ending was SO corny! this story was going along real good until the last chapter...what happened? "i'm a public speaker..." that was kind of lame. your story was good, i'll admit. nice topic, nice storyline. but that last chapter threw me. it was a really really corny ending. i thought it would be better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY I AM SO GLAD HE GOT PUT INTO JAIL! YOU MADE A GOOD DECISION! I'm so glad she wasnt pregnant after that bastard raped her, and Im glad Jer is such a sweetheart. If you start another story like this i will DEFINATELY be the first reviewer! *elyse* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. I have no advice for the future though. Anyways; Keep writing! -Tiffany |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes, i can't stop reading ur fic. Even with cliffhangers. (oneday... u will pay.) lol, hmm.. .a name? How about Antonio? Antonio Alkio (a.a) hmm, just an idea. Well, can't wait 4 the next chap. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! that was good. Keep writing. |