|Reviews for Abusing Authority|
| Pixie in a Birdcage chapter 4 . 9/10/2004
That made me feel so sad. What a horrible person to rape his own student. I don't know how someone could do something so horrible. I really liked this story. Please write more.
| Bleeding Air chapter 10 . 7/30/2004
Well, I read the whole thing, so I think it'd be just evil of me not to review. Especially since you reviewed my sotry o0o;. Hee. I don't have much time, but I decided to post this review in case I forgot. I have a terrible memory ._.;
Anyways, this story was definitely interesting. It kept my attention. I read it all in an hour XD Maybe I read fast... I don't know. I really liked Jer. Such a sweetie. Little saviour, lol. He sounded cute, too. Alkio just sounded demented.
I actually liked the ending. Happy endings make me happy. I mean, the whole story was depressing, and the ending was a relief. No angst. Yay. XDD
Crap, well. I'm out of time. I have more to say, but meh. Lovely story! I'm so glad I took the time to read it.
| pecado chapter 10 . 7/26/2004
P lol. what a great ending! you could have made it longer by adding more details, but i like it!
| html help chapter 5 . 7/21/2004
text text text
text you want in italics
text text text
text you want in bold
text text text
text you want underlined
text text the end.
type it up in notepad, use the tags above, and remove the asterisks. Oh and put wherever you want a line break.
Or, if you're using ms word, just put in the italics using the italics button and when you save, save as type .html or web page (it should be an option in the drop down menu when you save).
Hope that helped.
| Empress Inuyasha chapter 10 . 7/20/2004
can you ask for a happier ending? they get married, elope, and have a kid whose name shall forever be named loki...
| Empress Inuyasha chapter 9 . 7/20/2004
| CentauriSk chapter 10 . 7/17/2004
Oh my gawd, you just HAD to end it there...
Amazing story though.
| person chapter 10 . 7/14/2004
two words: loved it
| LenaeStarr chapter 10 . 7/13/2004
okay, I think I can live with that ending... sure I'm a little sad you didn't write more... but I can live with it.
| Cinnamon Moon Fairies chapter 10 . 7/12/2004
BRAVO! I'm glad you finished it this way. I would have had some difficulty, but you seemed to hit it right on the nose lol. Very nicely done. *Applauds* Bravo.
| Sammi-Rose chapter 10 . 7/12/2004
what the hell? not to flame you or whatever, but the ending was SO corny! this story was going along real good until the last chapter...what happened? "i'm a public speaker..." that was kind of lame. your story was good, i'll admit. nice topic, nice storyline. but that last chapter threw me. it was a really really corny ending. i thought it would be better.
| Ever-White Rose chapter 10 . 7/12/2004
YAY I AM SO GLAD HE GOT PUT INTO JAIL! YOU MADE A GOOD DECISION! I'm so glad she wasnt pregnant after that bastard raped her, and Im glad Jer is such a sweetheart.
If you start another story like this i will DEFINATELY be the first reviewer!
| twenty-first day chapter 8 . 6/22/2004
Good chapter. I have no advice for the future though. Anyways; Keep writing!
| LenaeStarr chapter 8 . 6/22/2004
yes, i can't stop reading ur fic. Even with cliffhangers. (oneday... u will pay.) lol, hmm.. .a name? How about Antonio?
Antonio Alkio (a.a) hmm, just an idea.
Well, can't wait 4 the next chap.
| Zombie Zak chapter 8 . 6/21/2004
that was good. Keep writing.