Oh, poor poor girl! And Jer shouldn't take advantage of the poor thing after what she's been through! Gr.

Oh no! What a horrible, awful psychotic man! I wish she'd jam a chair up HIS ass!

oh dear, what a horrible teacher! She needs to kick his slimey ass right into touch! Grr, evil man! Oh well, this si getting good. I hope Jer saves her!

woot, she's gonna get into serious trouble with that attitude... although, as far as I can see, that teacher sounds damn sexy, so I can't really see what the problem is!

I love it your doing great but now is NOT the time for Jer to kiss her. If you were just raped that would probaly freak you out more.

Give him a name like Damien or Lucifer. They both mean devil, which suits him in a way. This story is AWESOME! Don't stop! Ever! UPDATE!

i'm horrible with suggestions, or even with finishing my own stories *haha, you can check out how many stories i just leave "hanging"in my account.* but i think that wow, this was amazing...and beautiful...in this sad way, you know? like, it was amazing that her best friend, that their love wasn't truly recognized until she almost...well...to be frank, died.
onto other news,
hon, of course i would think of you as a person! for one thing, only a person who has truly been through a lot, and is still going through her share of battles *which i know you will win, it'll take a while, but you will win* could really bring so much beauty/pain/feeling into her writing as you do.
it's true, that with eating disorders, and with other forms of self harm, that there are times when you're mind will get you wrapped into a tailspin and you will be really scared about getting better. sometimes it's so frightening that you will want to just give up, but already you have reached that point, and like a hero, you have faced those fears and you are already choosing life. i think that the mirror part will be a hard one for a while, as right now you are probably really really malnourished, but the strange thing is that further down the road, when things start getting better, when your body starts to become healthy physically, that your mental issues, well, they will hurt, but they lessen. i think the hardest part is learning to love yourself in your entirety, to be able to look in the mirror and see what an amazing and beautiful human being you are.
your mother, your relationship with her, during this time, will become even better because of the fact that she's with you on this, she's with you when you are facing your battles, and so is everyone else.
i think one author that is an amazing read is francesca lia block, her writing helped me get through a lot. i'm reading primavera right now, and for some reason it made me think of you, of how primavera had to get away from everything she knew to discover her true beauty, to discover that what she thought she wanted, she didn't want at all, and what she really wanted, was always there. she had to rip herself apart before she began to love herself.
i know what you are probably going through, i mean, i don't really, but i have been through my own battle with anorexia, and i know that you can do it. i'm so happy that i had my love for writing, that i had my love for life, that i had people who were there for me and that i was able to get better, and not only get better, but to love myself. i know that you will too, it will not be fast *although your peers and other people in your life may become frustrated with the fact that it isn't something that you can just fix, that it really does take a lot of time* but that's ok, because as long as you are on the path to getting better, to loving yourself, as long as you keep your eye on the prize so to speak, as long as you know that you are loved and that you are getting closer to loving yourself with each day...you will become an even more amazing girl than you already are, you will become a woman, and because you write you will be able to reach others through that, to help them find their beauty, to deal with their pain.
i think that you will blow the world away with your beauty, with your words, with your voice. in fact, i think you already are.

This was very good, I really like it so far! Please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next!

Wow, I'm confused!
I don't mind cliffys I'm addicted to them!

hey! it worked! that means its fixed! anyway, i'm so happy jer came to save her, makes me feel a whole lot better, and maybe he'll kick the other dudes ass...
i love this fic, cant wait for an update!
~yams

Nice! Oh, so, does Jer like her? Will her teacher (oops, forgot his name :P) stop him or what? I think the next chap should be in the teacher's pov. You know, showing how frustrated he is that he can't show that he's there, but he doesn't want Jer touching her... you know, the good stuff ;). Nice chapter! Can't wait for the next!
Cinnamon

Hiya! CLIFFHANGER AGH! that was a little creepy. Nice job on this chapter. Just thought I'd say so. Um I have a few suggestions which I think are lame but it's your story.
1)Names...um I have no idea. He could have the same first name as Jer though. Sick twisted irony right there
2) Um Mr. Alkio could knock Jer out of course and Chandra could be in tons of mental anguish.
3) Have fun! :-)

wow... I'm so glad that Jer came. But what is he doing now? I probably should be able to predict it, but i just woke up, and this story is so unpredictable, which makes it fun to read! .'
I was reading the reviews too, and i think you're human, slaving away at the computers just so us reviewers can be happy! Well, maybe not EXACTLY like that, but i DO know you word hard andi just wanted to say THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!

*stares at Jer* uh ok thats kinda crepy...anyways that was short! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!

Is Jer gonna rescue her! He better!*Shakes fist*