Reviews for dry asphalt
Fallen Too Far chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
This is really beautiful, the description is fantasic, as though the whole thing is alive in the moment you read it. I'd love to read more of this, update soon.
Mlle Sara chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
hey! been a long time since i reviewed anything of yours, so I thought I'd have a big reviewing marathon today P Oh god, I love this, you're far superior than me at writing. I liked how the last line, summed up most of the chapter. UPDATE! Where have you gone? why aren't you writing *searches for you* ciao, babydoll
*the one and only sara*
frantic writer chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
i love it. it makes me feel inspired. the descriptiveness is so beautiful in a fransesca lia block kinda way.
wazawaisuru chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
Wow, that was just...gorgeous. The way you make your descriptions and choose your words is absolutely brilliant. Beautiful piece of writing you have here_!
ezyret chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
ooh! mysterious! now I need to know who this 'Ezra' is... please continue...