Reviews for Light Inside
sciwriter13 chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
this is beautiful! i adore the memory-patterned wallpaper line! please read and reveiw my poetry. i would love the opinion of such a good writer!
Nervous Neuron chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
I like it! Well written, me thinks .
EWindheim chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
I love the imagery in this, very imaginative.
Summerdazed chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
absolutely beautiful!
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catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
Nice imagery...
Karasu no sei chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Hm.. great imagery, as always... a nice break in the darkness of most of your other works.
Jennacharm chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
I got to you site through Dawn's site. Thought you might want to know. Anyway, now on to the piece.
At first, my very first impression was that is was very stereotypical. Like every run of the mill poem that contrast light and dark. But it got better. It got so much better.
I don’t like the mention of soul in the first line. It seems a little forced. I like inky blackness. But up until then I was still kind of ‘eh’ about the poem.
Then you got to ‘memory patterned wallpaper’ and I changed my mind. That is an awesome line. Then it got better with the ‘splatters line’.
I don’t like the end line. Maybe it’s just me…
Other than that… some great lines.
- Jennacharm
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
you definatley have a different style of writing each time i read. wow, lol! nice poem, it flows nicely and yeah. its good!