Reviews for day
Arsenic.Dreams chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
Good poem.
penumbral chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
I loved this! The imagery is SO vivid and you've captured it perfectly in these gorgeous descriptions. I especially loved the "a day...to forget" lines. Keep up the great work!
-jalisco
Linnet chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
Beautiful...I liked the lines "the begger begged as usual" and "papers turned to ash"-very nice details!
-Linnet
KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
Beautifully composed.
Agent Firefly chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
I think you got the right effect out of what was going on. It's sad, but captured well. Good job
pleasecometrue chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
I absolutly love poems that have such great feeling in them, great write.
DarkSorceress chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
Very powerful poem. Keep up good work!
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
Wow... very powerful. Ver powerful indeed.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
I liek it.. its very powerful and very descriptive... thanks for your review
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
This is a nice tribute but also well written, you have a nice grasp on what common events were taking place, the usual...as something terrifying strikes. When I get more time I'm going to check out more of your longer pieces. It looks like it will be worth it. thanks also for my review on "Illusions"
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
You never say when you put new stuff up! *evils* This is soo touching and haunting and creepy in a sad way! our choice of words is great as is the whole papers turned to ash etc bit! This is a fitting tribute well done.
DHABUZ chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
nice poem