Reviews for The Colors of My Mind |
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![]() ![]() Poems for me, are more personal to the writer and any review or critique outside of strengthening what may or may not be a weak poem can seem pointless. So let me be pointless for a moment. To me the imagery in "The Undead:" didn't feel the rain pelt my weakened body. is tight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "The Undead" I like the poem. It uses great imagery in less than 35 words! However, the title prompts me think something else, like the dead coming back to life. Perhaps a different title would add that extra bam to it. Besides that it gave the chills! Great work. |