Reviews for The Colors of My Mind
Drew chapter 1 . 1/9/2007
Poems for me, are more personal to the writer and any review or critique outside of strengthening what may or may not be a weak poem can seem pointless. So let me be pointless for a moment.

To me the imagery in "The Undead:"

didn't feel the

rain

pelt my weakened

body.

is tight.
Izaguirre chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
"The Undead" I like the poem. It uses great imagery in less than 35 words! However, the title prompts me think something else, like the dead coming back to life. Perhaps a different title would add that extra bam to it. Besides that it gave the chills! Great work.