Reviews for Stop Wanting
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
my head hutrs. where to start? either way it works out. BRILLIANT!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
For me...I think you always keep wanting, to do better, but its painful for the road is constant...You stop against this road praying for the "more" to go away, sometimes even wanting to retrace steps, less, maybe childhood when things are easier more protected...
But still to go back is impossible and do you really want that...so you want more more of your dreams, for me it is writing but also love.
imxnotxyourxstar chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
This was interesting...the spiral had cool effect on everything. Good job!
~Lsay312
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
This was really... cool. I love it... really creative and different. Eye candy poetry...
LovesLostCat chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
this is a cool spiral thing 'poem' if you will.
lisaslife chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
wow, This is definatly different, but i like it.
sunscraped chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
Caught your review. Thx too much. (I never use exclamnation pts) Really unique 'poem' thing... If you look at it a certain way, it makes a 9. See?
-KK
ApplesCM chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
Since you reviewed a lot of my poems I suppose I should review some of yours. This one is different...yet I like it...