|Reviews for Heaven's Scent is Hell|
| Last Straw chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
your poem has done what "fairytale" has done. it smushed it all togather, if you feel like it, you can fix it by putting 3 spaces between lines before you upload. if you ment for it to be that way, ignore me.
i like the last two lines alot. very good.
| Robb chapter 1 . 4/29/2004
i like this one lots.. its deep and like really interesting
| Trinity Joselyn Carter chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
wow.. heaven isn't so unlike hell is it? this was really good and the word choice was excellent!
| second hand chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
it got all messed up.. but i think you can seperate wher each line is