Reviews for Wall Between Us
Izella G chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
that was beautiful and so bittersweet. You definetly captured the moment. _

Hope to hear more from you soon


zeusfluff chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
Another great poem. Reminds me of what my bestfriend and I have always gone through. There has always been a wall in between the two of us. A little saying I always say when we are together is: "Divided We Fall, United We Have Never Stood: my friend". But sadly enough sometimes she cannot see this invisible wall. Keep up with your great poems. ~Melissa~
Dying Without Gackt chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
Also a nice feel to it, and it was sad too.
I Macbeth chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
i get such a profound sense of sorrow from this poem... The shattered glass reminds me vividly of a conversation i had about my old relationship... its very true to me... i love people who write from personal experience - it adds a certain truthful element to it - well done - keep it uup; i love your work! :D
forgottenmoon831 chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
Aw, sad poem. But very well written and good angst too! I love your writing style, oh yeah, and good imagery on the shattered glass part! Awesome job!
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
Engrossing as always; very emotional and moving.
I imagine so many have us if not all; have gone through something like this at one time or another. You speak of it with art in your words.
Very Well Done
Keep Writing!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
very sad yet pretty in its wording.
arwen-evenstar89 chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
this is really cool! I know what you feel like so much!
Siberia82 chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
Such a wonderful piece about the end of friendship. I recently lost one of my best friends, so I understand your feelings completely. Good job.
Amaya Windsong chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
thats so good! i love it! i can relate to this with a few of my old friends... that feeling SUX! lol.
p.s. thanks for reviewing So Confused! - it's a new poem, i dont actually like him though... lol. but it does sound like it huh?
Amara Ryden chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
nice job. )
Kenishiro chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
i know how you feel, i been there before, when the wall have been brought up you know that your stuck, in my opinion the best solution is to settle the differences.. good poem, keep up the good work!
faerie-gumdrops chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
Wowee great work. This is so emotionaly written and is very beautiful. I like your meter a lot here and how you describe feelings with such depth
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
nice analogy!
Aureya of Chocolate chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
ouch... that's gotta hurt :(
very well expressed, though. good stuff props to you!
lotsa luv,
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