Reviews for The Dividing Line
voice.writer chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
wow. WOW! this was amazing! it's so well-written, and I really did cry when i read it. it reminds me of when my grandpa was in the hospital with cancer, and i was in 5th grade when he died too. this is so touching, i love it!
Nimeneth chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
*Cries* It's so sad. I know how it feels to lose a grandparent. It's hard. Anyway, lovely way to get your feelings out, even if it was sad! *sniffle*
Kiaden chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
It's a really good story, reminds me of when my grandpa was in the hospital... heh...
Gabriel chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
WOW! just WOW! it was really good and it was very touchign and sad... now i remember when my great grandpa died.
Al Garfield Zelda Freak chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
you really wrote that? It's excellent! I could never write anything remotely that good [partially because I don't have a life ;-)] But seriously, good job.
Nolan Anthoney Quick chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
Meli this was truely something emoionall im sorry about everything that has felt so bad and wrong with yourself i think you did become stronger in the end that was very brave meli good for you i love you.